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干货|GRE 写作 Argument层层递进式的展开方法

派小星 2018-04-23

GRE 写作 Argument层层递进式的展开方法

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雷哥GRE写作名师 | Leonard

Argument部分的语段里通常会包含三个或以上的明显的逻辑错误。考生要找到这些逻辑错误，并把他们单独论述，其实并不难。有很多考生在找到了逻辑错误之后，并挨个论述攻击了，但还是分数不高。

这是因为，考生忽视了一项非常重要的评分标准：

develop ideas cogently, organize them logically and connects them with clear transitions

这就要求考生不仅每一段的论述都要写好，还要求每个逻辑错误的论述要按照一定的顺序，而且段与段之间要有层层递进的感觉。

所谓递进式的顺序要有一个让步的感觉：

1. 先说明逻辑漏洞A的存在；

2. 然后假定漏洞A不存在，此时再攻击漏洞B；

3. 就算漏洞A和B都不存在了，还有漏洞C。

所以写Argument的文章时，要有一种整体感。不要只找到几个零星的漏洞就满足了，而是要追求整篇文章浑然一体。

比如Argument 题库中第六篇：

Arctic deer live on islands in Canada’s arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer’s being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.

根据刚才的递进式原则，第一个该攻击的事相对而言比较轻微逻辑漏洞：调查数据不可靠。

文中只是简短地一笔带过 “according to reports from local hunters” 其中没有提到猎人的人数，以及他们所观察到的鹿的数量的下降这一现象是否普遍。