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2019年GRE 写作新题解析(二)

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Regina.Fan 2019-01-25 11:47:50
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摘要:今天我们来看一下2019写作题库argument第二道新题,并给大家梳理写作思路。

今天我们来看一下2019写作题库argument第道新题,并给大家梳理写作思路。

 

Argument 新题2

The following appeared in a health newsletter.

  "Nosinia is an herb that many users report to be as effective as prescription medications at fighting allergy symptoms. Researchers recently compared Nosinia to a placebo in 95 men and women with seasonal allergies to ragweed pollen. Participants in the study reported that neither Nosinia nor the placebo offered significant relief. However, for the most severe allergy symptoms, the researchers reported that Nosinia was more effective than the placebo in providing relief. Furthermore, at the end of the study, participants given Nosinia were more likely than participants given a placebo to report feeling healthier.We therefore recommend using Nosinia to help with your severe allergy symptoms.

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

 

参考翻译N是一种草药,很多服用者说N和抗过敏的处方药一样有效。最近,研究人员将N和缓释剂一起用在95名因为R草花粉过敏的男性和女性受试者身上。受试者说,N和缓释剂都不能明显缓解症状。然而对于严重的过敏症状,研究人员说N比缓蚀剂更有效缓解症状。此外实验结束之际,试用N的受试者比试用缓蚀剂的受试者说感到更健康。因此,我们建议使用N来帮助你严重的过敏症状。

 

结论:

最后一句,即We therefore recommend using Nosinia to help with your severe allergy symptoms.

 

论据:

第二到第六句,即Researchers recently compared Nosinia to a placebo in 95 men and women with seasonal allergies to ragweed pollen. Participants in the study reported that neither Nosinia nor the placebo offered significant relief. However, for the most severe allergy symptoms, the researchers reported that Nosinia was more effective than the placebo in providing relief. Furthermore, at the end of the study, participants given Nosinia were more likely than participants given a placebo to report feeling healthier.

 

背景:

第一句,即Nosinia is an herb that many users report to be as effective as prescription medications at fighting allergy symptoms.

 

假设:

1. R草花粉过敏=一般过敏

2. 受试者说的感觉=真实感觉

 

通过分析,画逻辑图如下:


 

 

分析每个环节的合理性,找到如下漏洞:


 

 

结合写作要求,列提纲如下:


The author need address these questions that :

1.detailed information about the studied men and women. (数据类问题)

2.The symptom of seasonal ragweed pollen allergy could be a good indication of incidence of usual allergy symptoms.(差异范围)

3.the effect of N at fighting allergy symptoms does not vary now.(时地全等)

4.Granted that N was more effective than P at fighting R,we cannot guarantee that N was more effective than P at fighting allergy symptoms.(因果关系错)

5.would the participants hide the actual feeling? (结论无据)

6.Shoule we take the advice fact that uses N to help  severe allergy symptoms? (结论无据)



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